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Feb 11, 2017 23:31
In the early morning, I left from Dubai International Airport to Narita Airport.
I rode the airplane for about eight hours, then arrived at Narita at just 17 o'clock.
Since I sat for a long time, I was really tired.
After riding the airplane, I rode a bus to back to my apartment.
At last, at around 21 o'clock, I came back.
In the moment when I opened the door of my apartment, I was filled with a sense of accomplishment.
However, my first thought after entering my room is "Oh, my feet are very stinky."
I immediately took a bus.
Then I put my shoes in ziplock and put them in a freezer.
I rode the airplane for about eight hours, then arrived at Narita at just 17 o'clock.
Since I sat for a long time, I was really tired.
After riding the airplane, I rode a bus to back to my apartment.
At last, at around 21 o'clock, I came back.
In the moment when I opened the door of my apartment, I was filled with a sense of accomplishment.
However, my first thought after entering my room is "Oh, my feet are very stinky."
I immediately took a bus.
Then I put my shoes in ziplock and put them in a freezer.
帰宅
今日は深夜に、ドバイ国際空港から成田空港に向けて出発しました。
フライト時間は約8時間で、成田空港に着く頃には丁度17時頃でした。
長時間座っていたため、ものすごく辛かったです。
飛行機の後はバスで移動し、遂に夜9時頃、自分のアパートに戻ってきました。
アパートについた瞬間、とても解放された気分になりました。
そして部屋に入って思ったのは、「自分の足臭い」ということでした。
すぐにお風呂に入り、靴はジップロックに入れて冷凍庫に入れました。
今日は深夜に、ドバイ国際空港から成田空港に向けて出発しました。
フライト時間は約8時間で、成田空港に着く頃には丁度17時頃でした。
長時間座っていたため、ものすごく辛かったです。
飛行機の後はバスで移動し、遂に夜9時頃、自分のアパートに戻ってきました。
アパートについた瞬間、とても解放された気分になりました。
そして部屋に入って思ったのは、「自分の足臭い」ということでした。
すぐにお風呂に入り、靴はジップロックに入れて冷凍庫に入れました。
No. 1 Jojo's correction
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- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In the early morning, I left from Dubai International Airport to Narita Airport.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I rode the airplane for about eight hours, then arrived at Narita at just 17 o'clock.
- I rode the airplane for about eight hours, then arrived at Narita at just 175 o'clock.
- Since I sat for a long time, I was really tired.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- After riding the airplane, I rode a bus to back to my apartment.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- At last, at around 21 o'clock, I came back.
- At last, at around 219 o'clock, I came back.
- In the moment when I opened the door of my apartment, I was filled with a sense of accomplishment.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- However, my first thought after entering my room is "Oh, my feet are very stinky."
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I immediately took a bus.
- I immediately took a bathus.
- Then I put my shoes in ziplock and put them in a freezer.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 Arun's correction
- Return Home
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In the early morning, I left from Dubai International Airport to Narita Airport.
- In took the early morning, fI ligheft from Dubai International Airport to Narita Airport.
- I rode the airplane for about eight hours, then arrived at Narita at just 17 o'clock.
- AfI rode ther sairpelandinge for about eight hours on the plane, I then arrived at Narita at 5just o17 o'clock in the evening.
- Since I sat for a long time, I was really tired.
- AsSince I was siatting for a long time, I was really tired.
- After riding the airplane, I rode a bus to back to my apartment.
- After riding the airplane, I rtodeok a bus to back to my apartment from the airport.
- At last, at around 21 o'clock, I came back.
- AtI lreast,ched athe aparoutmendt 21at 9 o' clock, I came back.
- In the moment when I opened the door of my apartment, I was filled with a sense of accomplishment.
- In the moment when I opened the door of my apartment, I was happy to havfille made with back. Itsense ofelt satccomplisfyihmengt.
- However, my first thought after entering my room is "Oh, my feet are very stinky."
- HowOn evnter,ing my firstoom I thought aftero entering my room iself "Oh, my feet are very stinky."
- I immediately took a bus.
- I immediately took a zip lock bag and put my shoes in them, after which I put the bag in the freezer.
- Then I put my shoes in ziplock and put them in a freezer.
- Then I put my shoes in ziplock and put them in a freezer.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 3 南蛮人's correction
Toru
Actually, putting shoes in a freezer to remove the smell is not famous at all, but it has a great effect.
Actually, putting shoes in a freezer to remove the smell is not famous at all, but it has a great effect.
Now there is something I never even though of.