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Feb 11, 2017 23:31
In the early morning, I left from Dubai International Airport to Narita Airport.

I rode the airplane for about eight hours, then arrived at Narita at just 17 o'clock.

Since I sat for a long time, I was really tired.

After riding the airplane, I rode a bus to back to my apartment.

At last, at around 21 o'clock, I came back.

In the moment when I opened the door of my apartment, I was filled with a sense of accomplishment.

However, my first thought after entering my room is "Oh, my feet are very stinky."

I immediately took a bus.

Then I put my shoes in ziplock and put them in a freezer.
帰宅

今日は深夜に、ドバイ国際空港から成田空港に向けて出発しました。

フライト時間は約8時間で、成田空港に着く頃には丁度17時頃でした。

長時間座っていたため、ものすごく辛かったです。

飛行機の後はバスで移動し、遂に夜9時頃、自分のアパートに戻ってきました。

アパートについた瞬間、とても解放された気分になりました。

そして部屋に入って思ったのは、「自分の足臭い」ということでした。

すぐにお風呂に入り、靴はジップロックに入れて冷凍庫に入れました。
No. 1 Jojo's correction
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  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • In the early morning, I left from Dubai International Airport to Narita Airport.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I rode the airplane for about eight hours, then arrived at Narita at just 17 o'clock.
  • I rode the airplane for about eight hours, then arrived at Narita at just 175 o'clock.
  • Since I sat for a long time, I was really tired.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • After riding the airplane, I rode a bus to back to my apartment.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • At last, at around 21 o'clock, I came back.
  • At last, at around 219 o'clock, I came back.
  • In the moment when I opened the door of my apartment, I was filled with a sense of accomplishment.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • However, my first thought after entering my room is "Oh, my feet are very stinky."
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I immediately took a bus.
  • I immediately took a bathus.
  • Then I put my shoes in ziplock and put them in a freezer.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 Arun's correction
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  • I immediately took a bus.
  • I immediately took a zip lock bag and put my shoes in them, after which I put the bag in the freezer.
  • Then I put my shoes in ziplock and put them in a freezer.
  • Then I put my shoes in ziplock and put them in a freezer.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 3 南蛮人's correction
> Then I put my shoes in ziplock and put them in a freezer.

Now there is something I never even though of.
Toru
Actually, putting shoes in a freezer to remove the smell is not famous at all, but it has a great effect.
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